Comment on Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer

[Innovimax SARL]

Please find below listed a lot of errors in the References

Please note also that errors could also be found in other part of the spec
* WSDL 2.0 Core
* WSDL 2.0 Adjuncts
* WSDL 2.0 SOAP 1.1 Binding
* WSDL 2.0 RDF Mapping

Best regards,

Mohamed ZERGAOUI
Innovimax AC Rep




In Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer
W3C Working Draft 26 March 2007
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-wsdl20-primer-20070326

Normative Reference :

"Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, March 1997. Available at
http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
instead of
"Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, June 1999. Available at
http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."

[[
[IETF RFC 3023]
     XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
]]
instead of
[[
[RFC 3023]
    IETF "RFC 3023: XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D.
Kohn, July 1998.(Seehttp://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.)
]]

XML (Fourth Edition) instead of (third)
Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition) instead of Namespace in XML
XML Schema Part 1: Structures Second Edition instead of XML Schema
Part 1: Structure
XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition instead of XML Schema Part
2: Datatypes

In Informative Reference

"XPointer Framework, Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 25 March 2003"
instead of
"XPointer Framework,Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 22 November 2002."

"XML Schema Versioning Use Cases, Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
Group Draft, 31 January 2006. Available at
http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
instead of
"XML Schema Versioning Use Cases , Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
Group Draft, 15 April 2005. Available at
http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"

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[Jonathan Marsh-2]

Thank you for this issue.  We tracked it as Issue 4427 [1] in our short Last Call period.  The Working Group endeavored to correct all the bib references in all the specs [2,3,4,5,6].

The spec should be in Proposed Recommendation shortly, if you disagree with the resolution of this issue please inform us as soon as possible.

[1] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4457
[2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-primer.html
[3] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
[4] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
[5] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-soap11-binding.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
[6] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-rdf.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8

Jonathan Marsh - http://www.wso2.com - http://auburnmarshes.spaces.live.com
 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@... [mailto:public-ws-desc-
> comments-request@...] On Behalf Of Innovimax SARL
> Sent: Sunday, April 08, 2007 12:49 PM
> To: public-ws-desc-comments@...
> Subject: Comment on Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version
> 2.0 Part 0: Primer
>
>
> Please find below listed a lot of errors in the References
>
> Please note also that errors could also be found in other part of the
> spec
> * WSDL 2.0 Core
> * WSDL 2.0 Adjuncts
> * WSDL 2.0 SOAP 1.1 Binding
> * WSDL 2.0 RDF Mapping
>
> Best regards,
>
> Mohamed ZERGAOUI
> Innovimax AC Rep
>
>
>
>
> In Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer
> W3C Working Draft 26 March 2007
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-wsdl20-primer-20070326
>
> Normative Reference :
>
> "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, March 1997. Available at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
> instead of
> "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, June 1999. Available at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
>
> [[
> [IETF RFC 3023]
>      XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
> Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
> ]]
> instead of
> [[
> [RFC 3023]
>     IETF "RFC 3023: XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D.
> Kohn, July 1998.(Seehttp://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.)
> ]]
>
> XML (Fourth Edition) instead of (third)
> Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition) instead of Namespace in XML
> XML Schema Part 1: Structures Second Edition instead of XML Schema
> Part 1: Structure
> XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition instead of XML Schema Part
> 2: Datatypes
>
> In Informative Reference
>
> "XPointer Framework, Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 25 March 2003"
> instead of
> "XPointer Framework,Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 22 November 2002."
>
> "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases, Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> Group Draft, 31 January 2006. Available at
> http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
> instead of
> "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases , Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> Group Draft, 15 April 2005. Available at
> http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
>
> --
> Innovimax SARL
> Consulting, Training & XML Development
> 9, impasse des Orteaux
> 75020 Paris
> Tel : [phone]
> Fax : [phone]
> http://www.innovimax.fr
> RCS Paris 488.018.631
> SARL au capital de 10.000 €

[Innovimax SARL]

On 5/10/07, Innovimax SARL <innovimax@...> wrote:

> Great !
>
> The reference have not been fully corrected
>
> And I see new ones in all the specs
>
> [[
> [IETF RFC 3023]
>     "XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
> Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
> http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [XLink 1.0]
>     XLink 1.0 Steve DeRose, Eve Maler, David Orchard, Editors. World
> Wide Web Consortium, 27 June 2001. This version of the XLink
> Recommendation is http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-xlink-20010627/ The
> latest version of XLink is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/xlink/.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [XForms 1.0]
>     XForms 1.0 (Second Edition), M. Dubinko, et al., Editors. World
> Wide Web Consortium, 14 March 2006. This version of the XForms 1.0
> Recommendation is http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xforms-20060314/. The
> latest version of XForms 1.0 is available at
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xforms/.
> ]]
>
> [[
> [SOAP12 Part 1]
>     SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework (Second Edition), M.
> Gudgin, M. Hadley, N. Mendelsohn, J-J. Moreau, H. Frystyk Nielsen,
> Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 27 April 2007. This version of the
> "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework" Recommendation is
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-soap12-part1-20070427/. The latest
> version of "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework" is available
> at http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/.
> ]]
>
> In http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-soap11-binding.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#References
>
> Reference to XSD Structures and XSD Datatypes are not to last version
> (second edition)
>
>
> But now some information in the text are to be revised
>
> In http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-primer.html
>
> [[
> 1.1 Prerequisites
>
> This primer assumes that the reader has the following prerequisite knowledge:
>     * familiarity with XML (Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0
> (Second Edition) [XML 1.0], XML Information Set [XML Information Set])
> and XML Namespaces (Namespaces in XML [XML Namespaces]);
>     * some familiarity with XML Schema (XML Schema Part 1: Structures
> [XML Schema: Structures] XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes [XML Schema:
> Datatypes]);
>     * familiarity with basic Web services concepts such as Web
> service, client, and the purpose and function of a Web service
> description. (For an explanation of basic Web services concepts, see
> Web Services Architecture [WS Architecture] Section 1.4 and Web
> Services Glossary [WS Glossary] glossary. However, note the Web
> Services Architecture document uses the slightly more precise terms
> "requester agent" and "provider agent" instead of the terms "client"
> and "Web service" used in this primer.)
>
> No previous experience with WSDL is assumed.
> ]]
>
> I propose to remove " (Second Edition)"
>
> Mohamed ZERGAOUI
> Innovimax AC Rep
>
>
> On 5/10/07, Jonathan Marsh <jonathan@...> wrote:
> > Thank you for this issue.  We tracked it as Issue 4427 [1] in our short Last Call period.  The Working Group endeavored to correct all the bib references in all the specs [2,3,4,5,6].
> >
> > The spec should be in Proposed Recommendation shortly, if you disagree with the resolution of this issue please inform us as soon as possible.
> >
> > [1] http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4457
> > [2] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-primer.html
> > [3] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [4] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [5] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-soap11-binding.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> > [6] http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-rdf.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
> >
> > Jonathan Marsh - http://www.wso2.com - http://auburnmarshes.spaces.live.com
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: public-ws-desc-comments-request@... [mailto:public-ws-desc-
> > > comments-request@...] On Behalf Of Innovimax SARL
> > > Sent: Sunday, April 08, 2007 12:49 PM
> > > To: public-ws-desc-comments@...
> > > Subject: Comment on Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version
> > > 2.0 Part 0: Primer
> > >
> > >
> > > Please find below listed a lot of errors in the References
> > >
> > > Please note also that errors could also be found in other part of the
> > > spec
> > > * WSDL 2.0 Core
> > > * WSDL 2.0 Adjuncts
> > > * WSDL 2.0 SOAP 1.1 Binding
> > > * WSDL 2.0 RDF Mapping
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > >
> > > Mohamed ZERGAOUI
> > > Innovimax AC Rep
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > In Web Services Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 0: Primer
> > > W3C Working Draft 26 March 2007
> > > http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-wsdl20-primer-20070326
> > >
> > > Normative Reference :
> > >
> > > "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> > > Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, March 1997. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
> > > instead of
> > > "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, S. Bradner,
> > > Author. Internet Engineering Task Force, June 1999. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt."
> > >
> > > [[
> > > [IETF RFC 3023]
> > >      XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D. Kohn, Authors.
> > > Internet Engineering Task Force, January 2001. Available at
> > > http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.
> > > ]]
> > > instead of
> > > [[
> > > [RFC 3023]
> > >     IETF "RFC 3023: XML Media Types", M. Murata, S. St. Laurent, D.
> > > Kohn, July 1998.(Seehttp://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3023.txt.)
> > > ]]
> > >
> > > XML (Fourth Edition) instead of (third)
> > > Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition) instead of Namespace in XML
> > > XML Schema Part 1: Structures Second Edition instead of XML Schema
> > > Part 1: Structure
> > > XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition instead of XML Schema Part
> > > 2: Datatypes
> > >
> > > In Informative Reference
> > >
> > > "XPointer Framework, Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> > > Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 25 March 2003"
> > > instead of
> > > "XPointer Framework,Paul Grosso, Eve Maler, Jonathan Marsh, Norman
> > > Walsh, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 22 November 2002."
> > >
> > > "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases, Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> > > Group Draft, 31 January 2006. Available at
> > > http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
> > > instead of
> > > "XML Schema Versioning Use Cases , Hoylen Sue. W3C XML Schema Working
> > > Group Draft, 15 April 2005. Available at
> > > http://www.w3.org/XML/2005/xsd-versioning-use-cases/"
> > >
> > > --
> > > Innovimax SARL
> > > Consulting, Training & XML Development
> > > 9, impasse des Orteaux
> > > 75020 Paris
> > > Tel : [phone]
> > > Fax : [phone]
> > > http://www.innovimax.fr
> > > RCS Paris 488.018.631
> > > SARL au capital de 10.000 €
> >
> >
>
>
> --
> Innovimax SARL
> Consulting, Training & XML Development
> 9, impasse des Orteaux
> 75020 Paris
> Tel : [phone]
> Fax : [phone]
> http://www.innovimax.fr
> RCS Paris 488.018.631
> SARL au capital de 10.000 €
>

--
Innovimax SARL
Consulting, Training & XML Development
9, impasse des Orteaux
75020 Paris
Tel : [phone]
Fax : [phone]
http://www.innovimax.fr
RCS Paris 488.018.631
SARL au capital de 10.000 €