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New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by Thomas Hannah :: Rate this Message:

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I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it is
shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
*Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have not
got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up or
keep developing the song.
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by KLX :: Rate this Message:

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rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.

Thomas Hannah wrote:
> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it is
> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have not
> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up or
> keep developing the song.
> *
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by Mark Preston-2 :: Rate this Message:

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Finish the song regardless of how you feel about it.  To actually "finish"
art is epic.......and difficult.


On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:

> rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.
>
>
> Thomas Hannah wrote:
>
>> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it is
>> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
>> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
>> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have not
>> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up or
>> keep developing the song.
>> *
>>
>>
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by Thomas Hannah :: Rate this Message:

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http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
<http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If Rapidshare doesn't
work use this...

2009/11/6 Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...>

> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If you can't use
> Rapidshare.
>
> 2009/11/6 Mark Preston <markprestonmusic@...>
>
> Finish the song regardless of how you feel about it.  To actually "finish"
>> art is epic.......and difficult.
>>
>>
>> On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:
>>
>> > rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.
>> >
>> >
>> > Thomas Hannah wrote:
>> >
>> >> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it
>> is
>> >> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
>> >> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
>> >> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have
>> not
>> >> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up
>> or
>> >> keep developing the song.
>> >> *
>> >>
>> >>
>> >
>> >
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by KLX :: Rate this Message:

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i liked the use of the vocal sample. can't stand dubstep bass though.
totally killed the entire song when that kicked in. can tell you used it
without really thinking about whether it fit in with the rest of the
song or not. i guess that's why i think these fad "styles" are
overrated. kills creative exploration.

you threw in ~trendy dub step bass wobble~ over something that had a
genuine mood to it and totally ~derailed~ it.

good effort though.

i'd also try to make some original drum sounds. that sounded like every
fucking song that has those drums.

~klx~



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Thomas Hannah wrote:

> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If Rapidshare doesn't
> work use this...
>
> 2009/11/6 Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...>
>
>  
>> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
>> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If you can't use
>> Rapidshare.
>>
>> 2009/11/6 Mark Preston <markprestonmusic@...>
>>
>> Finish the song regardless of how you feel about it.  To actually "finish"
>>    
>>> art is epic.......and difficult.
>>>
>>>
>>> On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:
>>>
>>>      
>>>> rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Thomas Hannah wrote:
>>>>
>>>>        
>>>>> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it
>>>>>          
>>> is
>>>      
>>>>> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
>>>>> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
>>>>> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have
>>>>>          
>>> not
>>>      
>>>>> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up
>>>>>          
>>> or
>>>      
>>>>> keep developing the song.
>>>>> *
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>          
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by Clint Anderson :: Rate this Message:

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I have to agree with KLX here, although i didn't hate the dubstep wobbly
bass just for the sake of it being generic, i just didnt think it fit really
well in the track... later when you get to like 2:10 or so and the dubstep
generico beat gets changed out, i think it starts to work again, then i
basically like the rest of it to the end
just that middle bit that wants to be a dubstep song that i dont care for so
much

keeping in mind that some kid will hear it and be like "FUCKING DUBSTEP BASS
AWESOME FTW WOOOTWOOTWOOT"
:)


Clint Anderson
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On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:08 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:

> i liked the use of the vocal sample. can't stand dubstep bass though.
> totally killed the entire song when that kicked in. can tell you used it
> without really thinking about whether it fit in with the rest of the song or
> not. i guess that's why i think these fad "styles" are overrated. kills
> creative exploration.
>
> you threw in ~trendy dub step bass wobble~ over something that had a
> genuine mood to it and totally ~derailed~ it.
>
> good effort though.
>
> i'd also try to make some original drum sounds. that sounded like every
> fucking song that has those drums.
>
> ~klx~
>
>
>
>
> -----------------------------------------------------------------------------klx
>
>
>
> Thomas Hannah wrote:
>
>> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
>> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If Rapidshare
>> doesn't
>> work use this...
>>
>> 2009/11/6 Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...>
>>
>>
>>
>>> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
>>> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If you can't use
>>> Rapidshare.
>>>
>>> 2009/11/6 Mark Preston <markprestonmusic@...>
>>>
>>> Finish the song regardless of how you feel about it.  To actually
>>> "finish"
>>>
>>>
>>>> art is epic.......and difficult.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Thomas Hannah wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> is
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
>>>>>> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
>>>>>> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> not
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>> or
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> keep developing the song.
>>>>>> *
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
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>>>
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by Basma O :: Rate this Message:

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it has these words for me: hope, melancholy, seriousness, bass.
i'm no music expert, just judging by feel. i like the vocals, ... to know
when a piece of art is finished is a challenge to all artists in the
beginning. and continues to be so sometimes until you know...
i think i can also feel some of the hesitation in the overall structure. the
flow and "hit points" are working on the excitement levels [to me] but tend
to be short and as i said hesitant? ...  klx points makes sense to me,
options. i did enjoy the bass being there though adds the seriousness feel
of on-the-edge [?]... good work!

2009/11/6 Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...>

> http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
> <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If Rapidshare
> doesn't
> work use this...
>
> 2009/11/6 Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...>
>
> > http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016
> > <http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=189016>If you can't use
> > Rapidshare.
> >
> > 2009/11/6 Mark Preston <markprestonmusic@...>
> >
> > Finish the song regardless of how you feel about it.  To actually
> "finish"
> >> art is epic.......and difficult.
> >>
> >>
> >> On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 2:37 PM, KLX <invisible@...> wrote:
> >>
> >> > rapidshare is a piece of shit. i got an error. good song.
> >> >
> >> >
> >> > Thomas Hannah wrote:
> >> >
> >> >> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it
> >> is
> >> >> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
> >> >> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
> >> >> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend
> have
> >> not
> >> >> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give
> up
> >> or
> >> >> keep developing the song.
> >> >> *
> >> >>
> >> >>
> >> >
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

by Kent Williams :: Rate this Message:

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Don't hard pan bass sounds.  And yes a triplet LFO on the filter is a
dubstep cliche.  There are other ways to add interest and motion.
Wherever that wobble bass is, there's enough other stuff going on that
something straightforward would work as well, like a straight up sine
wave.

And I listen to a lot of dubstep, but I resisted getting into until
people started doing stuff without that wobble bass.

On Fri, Nov 6, 2009 at 1:31 PM, Thomas Hannah <tomh500@...> wrote:

> I have almost finished a song, but now I am starting to think that it is
> shit, I can't decide. Please decide for me.
> http://rapidshare.com/files/303309825/REHSUPERAUQS.mp3.html
> *Please excuse its lack of mixing and mastering, me and my friend have not
> got to that stage yet. Please tell me what you think, should I give up or
> keep developing the song.
> *
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Yes. I like it. I wouldn't delete it just leave it and start something  
fresh, rather than trying to tweak the shit out of it based on peoples  
comments. Which could take forever and you may still not be happy with it.  
Take the comments on board and use them for your new tune. Or not.
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Re: New Idea, Wrong Idea?

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Nice track.  you should definitely finish it.  not much more to add than
whats already been said.  i didn't mind the wobbly bass (aside from the hard
panning).  i didn't mind the drum sounds either.  there is nothing wrong
with recognizability.  we're not all trying to re-invent the wheel.  just
trying to make a few tunes to shake some asses.  werd

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> Yes. I like it. I wouldn't delete it just leave it and start something
> fresh, rather than trying to tweak the shit out of it based on peoples
> comments. Which could take forever and you may still not be happy with it.
> Take the comments on board and use them for your new tune. Or not.
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