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New song.
by Loki Davison
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Hey All,
Here's my latest effort, recorded today. http://www.archive.org/download/HoldMe_684/loki_davison_-_hold_me.mp3 I'd like some input about if the 2 bass instruments and 2 lead instruments are too much? Bass is played pizzicato and arco. Lyrics: You came to me and held me, Washed the dirt of my feet. Now Time it changes everything maybe you'll see, nothing is perfect but you're perfect for me. I loved you when you came to me, you're eyes so open wide. I took the shackles from your heart and now you run and hide. I guess I saw it coming. The hope that you bring. Hope it colours everything and burns when I sing. Hope's a path to anguish. It teaches hearts to break. I should kick this addiction but I think that it's too late. Big thanks to Brian the Lion for the hydrogen drum templates. Instruments: acoustic guitar, electric guitar, double bass, vocals. Loki _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@... http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user |
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Re: New song.
by Julien Claassen
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Hello Loki!
I just listened to it. No, I don't think that the two basses are too much. You could even get away with the two leads... :-) They sometimes seem a bit sluggish to me. Beyond that they're nice and different enough in timbre. One thing I would like about this piece is, if you raised the volume of the vocal track(s) relative to the rest. Kindest regards Julien -------- Music was my first love and it will be my last (John Miles) ======== FIND MY WEB-PROJECT AT: ======== http://ltsb.sourceforge.net the Linux TextBased Studio guide ======= AND MY PERSONAL PAGES AT: ======= http://www.juliencoder.de _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@... http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user |
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Re: New song.
by James R. Clare
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Loki, great song writing. It's a good song. I did have to turn my volume all the way up to hear it though. I think the mix was good but the levels should be higher.
Jim On Sun, Jul 5, 2009 at 9:44 AM, Julien Claassen <julien@...> wrote: Hello Loki! _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@... http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user |
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Re: New song.
by Thorsten Wilms
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On Sun, 2009-07-05 at 22:53 +1000, Loki Davison wrote:
> Hey All, > Here's my latest effort, recorded today. > > http://www.archive.org/download/HoldMe_684/loki_davison_-_hold_me.mp3 Very nice mood and melody, good text. It all feels a bit sluggish against those tight drums. So you should either be more precise, or change the drums to be laid back. I guess the optimum would be in the middle ;) Singing should be more confident. -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@... http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user |
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Re: New song.
by Folderol
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On Sun, 5 Jul 2009 22:53:26 +1000
Loki Davison <loki.davison@...> wrote: > Hey All, > Here's my latest effort, recorded today. > > http://www.archive.org/download/HoldMe_684/loki_davison_-_hold_me.mp3 > > I'd like some input about if the 2 bass instruments and 2 lead > instruments are too much? Bass is played pizzicato and arco. Sounds fine to me :) -- Will J Godfrey http://www.musically.me.uk _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@... http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user |
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