Re: Editing the Whitepaper

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Hi John,

John Ladan wrote:
>
> This is my first contribution. While reading the white paper, I noticed a bunch
> of grammar errors (number, tense, syntax, etc.), so I decided to start fixing
> them. A few stylistic changes worked their way in to make the language a
> little more formal.

I committed your patch as r5615. I have to excuse me because there is a
typo in the commit message. Your front name is wrong (Johan). I'm really
sorry about this.

> Let me know how you like the changes. I can keep working on it if you want.
> The patch for trunk is attached.

The most of us are not English native speakers and yes, we really like
these changes. So if you are willing to work on these things then you
are more than welcome.

Thanks a lot

Michael

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