Thanks for the draft - I think it reads very well already and treads the fine
line of trying to help people understand the reasons for the difficulties of the
past years, as well as showing them the perspective and ways to engage.
I think this can help.
For the Zanshin link I'd say "GTD based task management & notes" instead of
"todo lists" because that is not only a better description, it is also more
likely to get people excited, because GTD has a large number of fans.
As to the placeholder you've put into the article for Paul and myself, perhaps
Together with the Plasma Active and Kolab communities, some people are now
also starting to look at how to bring some of these technologies onto the
server so that one day you'll have the power of your desktop on the go and
all devices. If you want to know more about this, check out the Kolab 3.0
Primer or get involved with any of the communities working on Plasma,
Nepomuk, Akonadi, Telepathy and so on.