Am 21.06.2012 23:41, schrieb Ulf Zibis:
> Oops crossposting.
> Looks much better. Maybe you still consider to compare with my suggestions.
> IMO you do not need to use the "(source)" parts, consistent to the paragraphs above.
To be consistent to the before paragraph a little more, maybe (1) use "source sequence" instead
"source data" and (2) start with "So although ...".
Furthermore I think, both paragraphs should be combined to one.